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	<title>Comments on: The perils of freestyling</title>
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	<description>Talking shop with fantasy fiction author Kameron M. Franklin</description>
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		<title>By: Kameron</title>
		<link>http://www.pensandswords.com/2005/09/23/the-perils-of-freestyling/comment-page-1/#comment-243</link>
		<dc:creator>Kameron</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 26 Sep 2005 03:17:08 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>That&#039;s one of the reasons why I sing the praises of outlining so loudly. It often saves you so much time in rewrites.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>That&#8217;s one of the reasons why I sing the praises of outlining so loudly. It often saves you so much time in rewrites.</p>
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		<title>By: Jace</title>
		<link>http://www.pensandswords.com/2005/09/23/the-perils-of-freestyling/comment-page-1/#comment-242</link>
		<dc:creator>Jace</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 25 Sep 2005 23:56:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There is a flipside, however, and it&#039;s a perilous trap I fall into regularly. I&#039;m too objective, and what seemed so brilliant yesterday doesn&#039;t work at all today. I actually got several chapters into a story when I decided the whole thing wasn&#039;t working out like I wanted, so I scrapped it and started over... aaaaand now I can&#039;t get past the first page because I keep revising what I&#039;m doing.

It&#039;s a fine line to walk.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There is a flipside, however, and it&#8217;s a perilous trap I fall into regularly. I&#8217;m too objective, and what seemed so brilliant yesterday doesn&#8217;t work at all today. I actually got several chapters into a story when I decided the whole thing wasn&#8217;t working out like I wanted, so I scrapped it and started over&#8230; aaaaand now I can&#8217;t get past the first page because I keep revising what I&#8217;m doing.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s a fine line to walk.</p>
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		<title>By: edgentry</title>
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		<dc:creator>edgentry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Sep 2005 21:55:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Amen, Marce.</description>
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		<title>By: mrockwell</title>
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		<dc:creator>mrockwell</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 23 Sep 2005 17:55:21 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>It&#039;s good that you can be so objective about your work; a lot of authors can&#039;t, and you can usually pick out their favorite passages because, although well-written, they do nothing to add to the story.  I&#039;m guilty of that more often than I&#039;d like, I know.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>It&#8217;s good that you can be so objective about your work; a lot of authors can&#8217;t, and you can usually pick out their favorite passages because, although well-written, they do nothing to add to the story.  I&#8217;m guilty of that more often than I&#8217;d like, I know.</p>
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