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	<title>Comments on: Relvan&#8217;s revision</title>
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	<description>Talking shop with fantasy fiction author Kameron M. Franklin</description>
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		<title>By: Kameron</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kameron</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 11 Nov 2006 23:36:49 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I didn&#039;t know you were writing a story for the anthology. A month left until the submission deadline. You can do it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I didn&#8217;t know you were writing a story for the anthology. A month left until the submission deadline. You can do it.</p>
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		<title>By: stuart</title>
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		<dc:creator>stuart</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Nov 2006 17:08:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Well done, Kam! I&#039;m looking forward to reading it.

RE; the prominance of magic and mysticism
Yeah, I am worried about that too for my story. There&#039;s not much magic in my world, and the mysticism is kind of in the background. But the story does show a clash (slap down really) of the normal world trying to invade the realm of the mist. 

The story hasn&#039;t moved past the outline stage, unfortunately. I want to write it, but not lose any momentum on the actual book to do it. Sigh. I&#039;m out of town on business next week. Maybe I can take advantage of the solitary nihgts in the hotel...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Well done, Kam! I&#8217;m looking forward to reading it.</p>
<p>RE; the prominance of magic and mysticism<br />
Yeah, I am worried about that too for my story. There&#8217;s not much magic in my world, and the mysticism is kind of in the background. But the story does show a clash (slap down really) of the normal world trying to invade the realm of the mist. </p>
<p>The story hasn&#8217;t moved past the outline stage, unfortunately. I want to write it, but not lose any momentum on the actual book to do it. Sigh. I&#8217;m out of town on business next week. Maybe I can take advantage of the solitary nihgts in the hotel&#8230;</p>
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